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Page 43
Panel One: Chow swings around towards the door and lets off a wild burst.
Panel Two: Bullets carve up across the doorway, but Kate dodges to the right and fires several shots at him…
SFX: BLAM! BLAM! BLAM!
Panel Three: …all of which hit. Chow goes down, still firing.
SFX: BRRRTTT
Panel Four: Mike simply watches all of this, aghast.
Mike: ?!
Panel Five: Kate stands over the gangster, looking nearly possessed.
Kate: …
Panel Six: Chow lies on the floor, unconscious, blood pouring from his wounds. His Uzi lies a stone’s throw away, smoking.
Panel Seven: Mike emerges from the back, still astounded.
Mike: Kate?
Mike: How?
Mike: Are–
Mike: Are you alright?
Mike: How’d you do that?
Kate: I…
Panel Eight: Kate, looks at him, equally stunned. She’s a total mess.
Kate: I don’t know…
{ Submitted by Kaitou (kaitou@kaitou.org) on February 17, 2010 7:37 pm }
{ Edited by dirk on February 22, 2010 11:45 am }
Hey this page looks great!
I really like the dynamics of the first panels.
Mike: “Kate, how’d you do that?”
Kate: “Oh, like this!” *BLAM!*
Mike: “Did you have to shoot the guy that’s already dead?”
Kate: “Well you DID ask.”
Kate looked positively feral the last few pages.