Author's Notes:

Another scene I decided to tweak because I was dissatisfied with the artwork. I originally drew this while running headlong into one of the busiest convention seasons I ever undertook. Consequently, I rushed the art and it remained a sore point with me during the intervening years.

I know I’ve basically broken every rule in comics that says “never go back and redo your pages”, and so what? I’m now very happy with this revision. And the rest of the book for that matter.

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