Author's Notes:

This is the first major change from the original webcomic version. I was never satisfied with this scene. It felt rushed, so I expanded it so we could see more of Kate’s past visually.

The biggest change other than the artwork is that her injury is now more plausible. A friend and former athlete pointed out knee injuries were far more common in soccer than track. Otherwise, the dialogue is essentially unchanged. Plus, it gave me a chance to draw young Kate kicking some ass on the field.

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